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Get to the Point!
Sharpen Your Message and Make Your Words Matter
by Joel Schwartzberg
The big idea
Most communication fails not because of poor delivery but because the speaker never identified a real point, a specific, defensible assertion, as opposed to a vague topic, and didn't organize the whole message around driving that point home.
To convert a vague topic into a real point, state it starting with I believe that, then stress-test it with So what, is it consequential enough to matter, and Why, can you defend it, until it becomes a sharp, arguable claim rather than a hollow generality.
Schwartzberg, a communications coach, defines a point as something you can state, explain, and support, explicitly distinct from a topic, which is just a subject.
Key ideas
Point vs. topic
A topic, like communication, is a subject; a point is an arguable, ownable assertion.
Start with the point
Open speeches, meetings, and emails by stating the point immediately instead of building up to it.
Sell the point
Structure your content so listeners could repeat your point back to you in their own words.
Stay laser-focused
Use the point as an anchor to redirect Q&A or a drifting conversation.
End with the point
Close by restating the point to reinforce the takeaway and signal the conversation is done.
Point-first workplace writing
Apply the same logic to business writing: point in the email subject line, short paragraphs, concise bullets.
Try it this week
- Take a recent presentation topic and rewrite it as a single I believe sentence.
- Rewrite your next work email so the point sits in the subject line and the first sentence.
- Prepare one redirect phrase, like here's the point, to use if your next meeting drifts off-topic.
- End your next presentation by restating your point in one sentence instead of a generic any questions.
Is it for you?
Best for
- Presenters and public speakers
- Professionals drafting emails and reports who tend to ramble
Less useful if
- Readers seeking deep rhetorical or persuasion theory rather than practical drills
- Contexts where a multi-message approach may serve better, a counterpoint some communication strategists raise